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He takes a hit from the cigarette and let's it out. His Guide waves the smoke away and coughs. 
Guide: you know you can't do that when we enter. It's not allowed. 
Man: why not? It's not a sin. 
Guide: it's a disgusting habit. 
Man: I'm not asking you to kiss me. 
His Guide shakes his head. 
Man: how much longer?
Guide: don't know. I don't exactly have the keys to the door you know. 
Man: who does?

His Guide turns to him serious. 
Guide: you know who. 
The man takes another hit. 
Man: so why me?
Guide: honestly, I've been asking myself that same thing. You would NOT have been my choice, but I'm not the one in charge. I just do as he says. 
Man: maybe he's losing it. 
His Guide looks at him, obviously offended by his remark. 
Guide: you will hold your tongue.

The Man looks at him and smiles. 
Man: easy Casper, I'm just saying. I'm not a saint. Far from it. Things I've done, I belong more to the other guy you know?

His Guide softens. 
Man: why would he want me?

The sky brightens. His Guide looks up and smiles. 
Guide: let's go ask him. 
The man looks up surprised. The clouds part and a bright pathway fades into view. The man stands up. His Guide walks forward then turns around. The man hesitates. 
Guide: it doesn't matter what you've done. If he wants you, he'll reach all the way down to get you. But if you want him, then follow me. 
Tears well up in the Man's eyes. He feels happy, safe even. He looks back at his Guide, nods, and follows beside him. 
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ASCENSION He takes a hit from the cigarette and let's it out. His Guide waves the smoke away and coughs. Guide: you know you can't do that when we enter. It's not allowed. Man: why not? It's not a sin. Guide: it's a disgusting habit. Man: I'm not asking you to kiss me. His Guide shakes his head. Man: how much longer? Guide: don't know. I don't exactly have the keys to the door you know. Man: who does? His Guide turns to him serious. Guide: you know who. The man takes another hit. Man: so why me? Guide: honestly, I've been asking myself that same thing. You would NOT have been my choice, but I'm not the one in charge. I just do as he says. Man: maybe he's losing it. His Guide looks at him, obviously offended by his remark. Guide: you will hold your tongue. The Man looks at him and smiles. Man: easy Casper, I'm just saying. I'm not a saint. Far from it. Things I've done, I belong more to the other guy you know? His Guide softens. Man: why would he want me? The sky brightens. His Guide looks up and smiles. Guide: let's go ask him. The man looks up surprised. The clouds part and a bright pathway fades into view. The man stands up. His Guide walks forward then turns around. The man hesitates. Guide: it doesn't matter what you've done. If he wants you, he'll reach all the way down to get you. But if you want him, then follow me. Tears well up in the Man's eyes. He feels happy, safe even. He looks back at his Guide, nods, and follows beside him. #storytelling  #storytease  #stories  #narrative  #lake  #sky  #ascencion  #heaven  #angels  #religion  #god  #guardianangel  #guide  #man  #sin  #forgiveness  #service  #photo  #film  #shortstory  #director  #producer  #reading  #writersofinstagram  #read  #wattpad  #water  #instagram  #drama  #supernatural 

5 Comments:

  1. abitofchic

    Where are they going? πŸ˜†

  2. listeningart

    Very nice

  3. valenciz

    😎

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